Iliked your poem espcially the poem escpecialoly the second verse and the use of the word awoken.
I'm hurting, crying, bleeding, dieing, screaming, pleading, begging, needing. You won't hear me, won't be near me, closed the door, loved no more. I'm banished, broken, pain awoken, deeply crying, hurting, dieing. |
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