The Eclectic Pen - Anguish


By: Kim L. (ceridwen999)   + 3 more  
Date Submitted: 2/12/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 15
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  I'm hurting,
crying,
bleeding,
dieing,
screaming,
pleading,
begging,
needing.

You won't hear me,
won't be near me,
closed the door,
loved no more.

I'm banished,
broken,
pain
awoken,
deeply crying,
hurting,
dieing.


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Brandi H. (poetess) - - 2/23/2009 12:25 AM ET
Iliked your poem espcially the poem escpecialoly the second verse and the use of the word awoken.
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