The Eclectic Pen - Antithesis of Silence


By: Carmela M.   + 7 more  
Date Submitted: 1/12/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 59
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Silence

Is amazing….
Peaceful like a single cloud in the sky
Refreshing like a cool glass of water.
Enveloping like a comfortable blanket.
Nurturing like an old friend.
Why, then, do I not make dates with it more often.

Silence

Screams at me of emptiness
Brings to me fears imagined
Unsettled pangs of loneliness for times when loved ones were near.

A long empty corridor with no open doors.




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Jim H. (Pecos45) - 1/12/2007 5:37 PM ET
I really like this. Great images. However, I can't help wishing you separated the themes rather than combining the positive & negative. But it's a good one. Just my thoughts.
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 12/21/2007 1:32 PM ET
I love the imagery of the corridor. Very evocative.
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