The Eclectic Pen - Awaiting Romance


By: Thomas D. (Booktrader)  
Date Submitted: 2/26/2007
Last Updated: 2/26/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 202
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  AWAITING ROMANCE

As I look up to the sky in search of blue,I wonder if I know anyone as wonderful as you.
As the stars tell me for as far as I can see,you're as vast as the milky way,I'll tend to agree.
Your eyes sparkle brilliance,as so do the stars,you both are mysterious,both you and planet mars.
And as your sparkling eyes seem to say,you can't have my heavenly love,at least not today.
As waves of perception nuzzle by,all I can ask is why?
For all things have a place and time,this is the place,but not the time.
While distant thoughts soar into space,I'll wait for the future and keep my pace.
And as the world turns,I'll know it's time,we can start all over again and read this rhyme.




AUTHOR:THOMAS DUBOIS
COPYRIGHT(1980)


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Thomas D. (Booktrader) - 2/26/2007 6:41 PM ET
I WROTE THIS POEM FOR MY SWEETHEART,AT THE TIME I WAS IN LAKE PLACID,NY,1980 WINTER OLYMPICS,SHE WAS IN FAIR OAKS,CA.
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 2/26/2007 9:11 PM ET
nice effort, but would be more effective if it wasn't all in uppercase.
Thomas D. (Booktrader) - 2/26/2007 11:34 PM ET
OK,I CORRECTED THE UPPERCASE LETTERS....Thomas Dubois
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