The Eclectic Pen - I BURIED YOU DEEPER LAST NIGHT


By: Barbara P. (gotchagal) - ,   + 19 more  
Date Submitted: 5/7/2010
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 52
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  I buried you deeper last night.

You with your searching mouth,

your skillful hands

playing me like a violin,

forcing me to reach for the notes;

vibrating, pouring out your music.


I found a body with a softer touch,

and warmer ways,

whose loving arms

carried me oh, so gently

into a sweeter melody,

and I buried you deeper last night.


Barbara (Gregory) Pearlman
7/27/77


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Tonia A. (toniaa) - 6/13/2010 10:46 AM ET
this is an interesting theory. you could make a song of it...with the i buried you deeper last night as the bridge. i get the meaning of the song..wow who hurt you? I like it...its not finished..I want to here more.
Deanna T. (romance-writer81) - 6/22/2010 7:37 AM ET
I LOVE it! Very poetic and flows together well
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