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Subject: The bad sex award goes to...
Date Posted: 1/4/2011 2:27 PM ET
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EC mentioned this at HFO and thought I'd share here so everyone can enjoy


Date Posted: 1/4/2011 2:47 PM ET
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That is hysterical!!!

Date Posted: 1/4/2011 3:03 PM ET
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Oh Lordy!  LOL

Date Posted: 1/4/2011 3:04 PM ET
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Like a lepidopterist mounting a tough-skinned insect with a too blunt pin he screwed himself into her.


Like a lepidopterist? Seriously? I believe it's safe to assume this is the first time this particular word has been used in a sex scene. How incredibly UN-sexy. ;-)

That's just weird.

Date Posted: 1/4/2011 3:27 PM ET
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The whole thing sounds painful. Let's hope the younguns aren't learning from such sources.

Date Posted: 1/4/2011 3:38 PM ET
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like an otter through wet sand

upturned like the nose of the loveliest nocturnal animal, sniffing in the night

She released his hair from her fingers and twisted onto her belly like a fish flipping itself

What's with the all the weird references to animals?

Date Posted: 1/4/2011 3:56 PM ET
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At least there's no volconoes of honey cool

Date Posted: 1/5/2011 12:12 PM ET
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What's with the all the weird references to animals?


looks to me like someone took his creative writing teacher's advice a tad too seriously....ick! that passage isn't titillating in the least; makes me want to go back through it to better analyze each simile and allusion....