The Eclectic Pen - Battles


By: Crystal S. (LiveLife)   + 35 more  
Date Submitted: 2/20/2008
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Words: 230
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  She walks down the street
She feels peoples eyes on her
She starts to walk faster
She knows something is chasing her

She doesnt slow down
She keeps speeding up
Someone calls her name
She doesnt look back

She comes to a crossroad
She doesnt look both ways
She steps off of the curb
Into the path of an oncoming car

The car hits its breaks
But it is to late
Her body goes flying
Up into the air

Her life flashes before her
She thinks of things
She has not done
Shes feelin the pain

She screams someones name
But who does she call
She doesnt even know
She just knows shes alone

The person who called her name
Rushes to where her body landed
He yells and he screams
"Someone call 911 now"

People come running
They dont know what to do
The person who called her name
Grabs a hold of her hand

He tells her to hang on
That he loves her
Dont give up
Dont give in

Her mind takes her
On a Journey
She goes back
To a place she doesnt want

In the dark he comes near her
She screams and trys to get away
He holds her down and doesnt let go
She lashes out and finally fights back

The guy holding her hand
Keeps on holding, not letting go
He tries to bring her back to him
He knows shes in a place she cant handle

He calls her name
He kisses her lips
He holds her as gently as he can
He prays for her to live

The girl wins her battle
In her mind
She fights back
To her real life


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Christine D. (destiny6260) - 2/20/2008 10:22 PM ET
wow thats amaxing u really r good~
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