The Eclectic Pen - Bedroom eyes


By: Bethany M. (psuchick402)   + 11 more  
Date Submitted: 8/9/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 49
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  Seduction
with every glace.
Glassy eyes
filled with passion
to be let loose.
Those eyes
lead to a gentle touch
on my arm
on my back
on my face.
Closer you eyes
come to mine,
looking at my
persuasive lips
and then they touch.

Your passion surges
through your lips
into my body.
Wanting, longing
for more
under the shifting trees
and hazy sky.
More of me,
more of us.
Never letting go.


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Silvercat - 8/19/2007 4:39 AM ET
Very, very nice...
Terry J. - 11/3/2007 9:27 PM ET
i love it, and i cant even say why...good work. very very good
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