The Eclectic Pen - Blue


By: Mike C. (Ducky93)  
Date Submitted: 1/17/2009
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Blue


I had a bug named Blue


She was a super sleuth


Sneaking through the grass


With super, super sass




I found my bug named Blue


I found her in the clover


I picked her then right up


And brought her then right over




I brought her then right over


Right over to the box


The box that I would keep her in


With lots and lots of rocks!!




When I got home; I


Took her out to play


We were playing fine


Until she flew away




She flew into moms room


Right behind the dresser


I still think of her and none


The very lesser




I think of her none the lesser


Because I think with glee


That Blue is now away and gone


Blue is now free




The only thing about her freedom


Is that she isn't free


She's only free to roam the house


to live her life with me


By: me!!!!


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Marta J. (booksnob) - 1/19/2009 10:23 AM ET
This would make a great kids book!
Kimberly G. (kimbrbee) - , - 1/28/2009 12:53 PM ET
This is super cute and with some illustrations it could be a really good children’s book.
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