The Eclectic Pen - Blue

By: Mike C. (Ducky93)  
Date Submitted: 1/17/2009
Words: 130


I had a bug named Blue

She was a super sleuth

Sneaking through the grass

With super, super sass

I found my bug named Blue

I found her in the clover

I picked her then right up

And brought her then right over

I brought her then right over

Right over to the box

The box that I would keep her in

With lots and lots of rocks!!

When I got home; I

Took her out to play

We were playing fine

Until she flew away

She flew into moms room

Right behind the dresser

I still think of her and none

The very lesser

I think of her none the lesser

Because I think with glee

That Blue is now away and gone

Blue is now free

The only thing about her freedom

Is that she isn't free

She's only free to roam the house

to live her life with me

By: me!!!!

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Marta J. (booksnob) - 1/19/2009 10:23 AM ET
This would make a great kids book!
Kimberly G. (kimbrbee) - , - 1/28/2009 12:53 PM ET
This is super cute and with some illustrations it could be a really good children’s book.
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