The Eclectic Pen - Brand New


By: April V. (Spooky)   + 9 more  
Date Submitted: 1/25/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 71
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  Brand New

I never knew that there could be
A brand new day, a brand new me
That I could start my life anew
Not about me, but all about You
That there is sun beyond the rain
And there is joy beyond the pain
I tried everything, all that I knew
Just to find myself more distant from You
But you have made it clear to see
Todayís a brand new day, Iím a brand new me

what do you think?


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Colleen G. (azrainstorm) - 1/25/2008 11:30 PM ET
I loved this.
Matt K. (Moforious) - 1/27/2008 11:52 PM ET
Needs more gore.
April V. (Spooky) - 2/11/2008 2:04 PM ET
The point of this was not to be gory Matt...thanks Colleen! I am glad you like it!
Roy B. (mountdewboy) - 9/29/2008 8:32 PM ET
Straight and to the point..... Good Job!
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