The Eclectic Pen - A Broken Family


By: Danielle A. (danie88) -  
Date Submitted: 10/8/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 62
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  I wrote this poem a couple of years ago when my parents started going through the divorce process... its very short, but I plan on adding more to it sometime soon. let me know what you think...

A Broken Family

A family once whole

has now been broken,

torn between one another

our hearts have spoken,

the pain inside I just can't take,

torn and tattered

my heart will break.



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Sabriena W. (hazeleyesrangeleyes) - 10/8/2008 3:45 PM ET
That's sad.
ericjasongastelum - 10/10/2008 6:26 AM ET
i think it's complete. that's what i think.
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