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Subject: A Broken Family
Date Posted: 10/7/2008 9:07 PM ET
Member Since: 8/26/2008
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I wrote this poem a couple of years ago when my parents started going through the divorce process... its very short, but i plan on adding more to it soon. let me know what you think...

A Broken Family

A family once whole

has now been broken,

torn between one another

our hearts have spoken,

the pain inside I just can't take,

torn and tattered

my heart will break.

Date Posted: 10/7/2008 9:19 PM ET
Member Since: 10/7/2006
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Dani very heartfelt.  As a divorced woman I can feel the pain. Excellent work