The Eclectic Pen - Caden


By: Lynn B. (seraphina)   + 7 more  
Date Submitted: 4/13/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 78
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  Quiet introspection.
Lots of concentration.
Never giving up.
Bless this boys creation.


Trying harder everytime,
Knows his numbers
and words that rhyme.


Very smart for being four,
Can't have his way,
But he wants more,
Candy,chips and ice cream cones.
Time for bed,
He cries and moans.


Sleep soon comes,
The night does pass,
Wakes with the sun,
Starts to harass.


He wants to play with the Mario's,
But not until he eats his cheerios.
Back to the game until he wins.
With concentration he begins.


He'll never quit.
Right there he'll sit.
Until he has all the stars,
That's it.




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Sarah T. (sarah5775) - 4/15/2007 12:07 AM ET
Awww....that was sweet.
Tom A. (TomsBooks333) - 4/15/2007 10:30 PM ET
Cute!
Marta J. (booksnob) - 4/16/2007 8:48 AM ET
This really captures the impetuous nature of kids--love it!
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