The Eclectic Pen - on companions and life outcome


By: Joyce M. (j3m)   + 16 more  
Date Submitted: 2/13/2009
Genre: Health, Fitness & Dieting » Relationships
Words: 53
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  ooooh it hurts, it hurts
he said
you ate too much
she said
ooooh my head is spinning
he said
you drank too much
she said
ooooh I feel very bad
he said
this too shall pass
she said

ooooh it hurts, it hurts
she said
food will help
he said
ooooh my head is spinning
she said
drink will help
he said
ooooh I feel very bad
she said
you can be numb
he said







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Laura B. (Lbrownblack) - - 10/10/2009 2:13 PM ET
masochistic.
Laura B. (Lbrownblack) - - 10/10/2009 2:14 PM ET
how is this on companions and life outcome?
Joyce M. (j3m) - 9/10/2013 11:14 PM ET
In the first one the companion gives their friend the truth and leads them to greater health. In the second the companion gives their friend avoidance methods and leads them to destruction.
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