The Eclectic Pen - D


By: Sophira B. (sophiraness)   + 13 more  
Date Submitted: 11/13/2008
Last Updated: 11/19/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 56
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I disappoint myself
With the disillusion
That discontentment is temporary
Instead of definite
Drastically deferring
To distinguished forms
Of denial about expectations
Of disturbing proportions
Or distinct exaggeration -
In deference to delving
Beneath the definitive issues
That defines the dramatic
Planes of a distressing
Relationship - it defies the
Doorway to destruction
And drafts strength from the
Decided desire to
Distance the end from
Destroying the beginning
Of a dream realized



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Veronica S. (snowkitty) - - 11/13/2008 2:29 PM ET
It couldn't have been too mediocre. Very good, I enjoyed it.
Justina C. (stinasstoryspot) - 11/13/2008 9:19 PM ET
Astounding Alliteration.
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 11/14/2008 5:54 AM ET
Wow! He must of stepped in it big time. I can feel the heat come off from this, Well done.
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