The Eclectic Pen - Dad's haiku


By: Marta J. (booksnob)   + 4 more  
Date Submitted: 6/20/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 9
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  Long-forgotten scent
Of Pall Mall, love, Palmolive
Clung to my father


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Silvercat - 6/20/2007 1:00 PM ET
Marta, this is beautifully written. Nine words with you at the helm speak volumes. Our wonderful fathers, and sometimes those that will step in to be our step-fathers are so important in our lives. Thank you...
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 6/20/2007 3:47 PM ET
beautiful
Lindsey B. (Lindsey) - 6/21/2007 9:47 AM ET
I really like the "Pall Mall, love, Palmolive" line. I see what you did there. Very beautiful poem..
Diane D. (Inky) - 7/3/2007 4:46 PM ET
A lovely haiku, Marta. You can feel the love through your words. Thanks for sharing. Diane
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