The Eclectic Pen - Dancing In The Wind


By: IONE L. (zaneygraylady)   + 85 more  
Date Submitted: 5/22/2007
Last Updated: 5/22/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 37
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  on the great lake
choppy waves advancing
and retreating
a ring surrounded sun
graced
this perfect day

swooping swaying soaring
weaving in the wind
to music
kites were dancing
precise as blue angles
their grounded pilots
pulling string
as God and I were watching
with hearts flying
mesmerized



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Maria P. (mpez) - 5/22/2007 10:45 PM ET
Beautiful! I especially love the last stanza.
Jim H. (Pecos45) - 5/23/2007 9:45 PM ET
I like. :)
Marta J. (booksnob) - 5/25/2007 4:47 PM ET
Just beautiful!
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 5/31/2007 11:41 PM ET
Very nice. I recently read a novel called "Dancing on the Wind" (mary jo putney) and thought it was a nice title (maybe what leaves do in the fall) until the author explained that it was an 1800's metaphor for someone dangling at the end of a hangman's rope.
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