The Eclectic Pen - The day you were born


By: Barbara S. (sissyboo)   + 12 more  
Date Submitted: 1/13/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 48
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  I remember the day you were born
that cold snowy January day
when i held you for the first time
so little then
so full of life wishing you the best
so full of hopes and dreams
of what your life would bring
I remember that cold snowy January day
as if it were yesterday.


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Jennifer M. (jenmcptx) - 1/13/2007 8:18 PM ET
nice poem. My 9 year old said she liked it too.
Kristy M. (queenbee6) - 1/18/2007 7:56 AM ET
I love this.
Annette V. (AVICIK) - 1/18/2007 4:08 PM ET
very nice poem.
Crystal S. (LiveLife) - 2/20/2008 10:09 PM ET
I love this poem boo. It is very heartfelt.
Stacy B. (stori) - 7/8/2008 11:22 AM ET
Very life like poem. Like I was really there. I haven't heard one quite like this. TWO THUMBS UP
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