The Eclectic Pen - Dead


By: Tammy B. (TammyB)   + 3 more  
Date Submitted: 10/28/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 37
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  Dead

I see you
So lost
So empty
Scared

I beat you
Crimson splatters the wall
I laugh
I beat you again
Over and over, mercilessly
Enraged, primal scream echo

I collapse and gaze at you

No one cares
No one cries

Cold dead eyes
Stare back at me
From broken mirror shards


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Terry J. - 11/1/2007 6:31 PM ET
this is intense, scary, raw, and somehow its so good. well done
Matt K. (Moforious) - 11/5/2007 4:35 AM ET
Sweet. I love it.
Tammy B. (TammyB) - 12/8/2007 12:13 AM ET
thanks, guys...I was *SO* mad when I wrote this...lol
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