The Eclectic Pen - My Fashionable Demise


By: Gale B. (tangolady)   + 5 more  
Date Submitted: 8/3/2008
Last Updated: 8/6/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 40
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My Fashionable Demise*


This
tattered old thing?

I'll never miss it.
I hope
for something
more exquisite.
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*I've come to the conclusion this poem is a little too obscure.
The theme is death and resurrection. The tattered old thing is my aged anatomy.


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Joyce M. (j3m) - 8/4/2008 12:20 AM ET
sweet.. makes me want to clean my closet out
Marta J. (booksnob) - 8/5/2008 4:35 PM ET
CUTE!!!
Rachel D. (romancejunkie) - 8/15/2008 4:04 PM ET
Short and sweet. I would not have assumed that you were talking about your body but I think we can all relate to the sentiment. Reminds me a bit of Dorothy Parker.
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