The Eclectic Pen - Feel


By: Kerry M. (eduman)  
Date Submitted: 3/5/2009
Genre: Health, Fitness & Dieting » Relationships
Words: 197
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  I feel like I've seen it all before
there are no suprises left for me anymore.

I feel like there is nothing left to do
but watch the tube `til my brains turn to goo
and if there is an alternative I haven't got a clue.

I feel like throwing in the towel
and trading in my youthful smile for a grumpy old man's scowl.

I feel like staying home in bed
to conversate with the voices in my head
and give in to the habits that I know I'll never shed.

I could feel you
You could feel me to
Know one should feel like we do
I want to feel new

You feel like you've seen it all before
this happens every time and it's becoming such a bore.

You feel like there is nothing left to do
for years you've tolerated my bad moods
and there might be something better than avoiding our bedroom

You feel like throwing in the towel
It's sad how I've become and how I've drug you down

You feel like staying home in bed
but you've made a liberation plan instead
and you've got to leave in spite of all the voices in your head

I could feel you
You could feel me to
No one should feel like we do
You want to feel new


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Kami (Kidsey) - 3/6/2009 12:04 AM ET
ok then. A bit confusing (NO OFFENSE!) And all the riming (sorry (bad speller)) It seems a little childish. But still, a work of true art.
Laura B. (Lbrownblack) - - 10/10/2009 2:12 PM ET
doesn't seem childish to me, keep writing, I like it, and, I think I've been somewhere similar, before. I bet this speaks to a lot of people (except for the ones who aren't childish, which are all, but, least of which aren't willing to admit it, or to deny it!)
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