The Eclectic Pen - Forest


By: Susan Q.   + 7 more  
Date Submitted: 1/24/2010
Last Updated: 1/27/2010
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Words: 163
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  As I walked through the crisp cool air I stoped and looked up mesmerized by the clouds slowly drifting over my head the patterns diffrent but yet all the same. I suddenly started to run, the green leaves of the forest whipping past my head; an overwhelming feeling, joy. I twirled in the air the birds my music the well worn path my dance floor. I sunk down now I was the beast, the predator I growled a deep growl I was ruler of the forest, king of this domain. Then it started raining but I didint care I was an animal of the sea now, I let the cool drops of rain slowly drip down my body before cascading on the ground. But then I heard a voice and was no longer a being of the sea I was a bear cub slowly running into the strong protective arms of my mother.

By Michael Quint
Susans son
Age 12


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Susan Q. - 1/24/2010 8:47 PM ET
Sorry it has been so long since I have written. The older I get the less time I have to write. Michael
Marta J. (booksnob) - 1/27/2010 5:36 PM ET
Your writing is getting better as you get older. Good work, Michael!
Jesse (EddyKrueger) - 1/28/2010 2:03 AM ET
I thought it was great. If writing is something that you love, then I can expect you to be a master by the time you're my age. :)
TJ S. (reader01) - 1/31/2010 5:52 PM ET
your 12? that was terrific !!! your better than a 45 year old!!
Robin K. (bashevis) - 2/4/2010 8:54 AM ET
wonderful description and conveyance of feelings. impressive, I think. keep writing, young man. not that you need anyone to tell you to.
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