The Eclectic Pen - The great I Am


By: Alicia B.  
Date Submitted: 7/3/2009
Last Updated: 7/3/2009
Genre: Christian Books & Bibles
Words: 55
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  What is there in life?
We live, we die
what difference does it make
the world goes on
in a millenium we will be forgotten
are we a toy and no more?
When we die these worries will be forgotten
the Lord will come
we will understand
but as for now...
we will wonder
and know nothing
we must trust in his word
the great I Am


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KellyAnne O. (GreenGarnet) - - 7/3/2009 6:54 PM ET
very good, i enjoyed the simple un complexity of the poem, yet you wrote it in a way where you didnt need alot of words to find the meaning. Well done! Kellyanne O
Rancher77 - , - 7/8/2009 12:56 AM ET
Very thought provoking. I am glad that there are other Christian poets that God is blessing with the gifts of writing and using words to express your love for God. Thank you and may God bless all your writings.
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