The Eclectic Pen - Haiku Minus Nine


By: Paul H. (nessus19) - ,   + 43 more  
Date Submitted: 2/8/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 6
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  She's become a ghost
In my heart


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Anne T. (beadyreader) - 2/8/2007 6:20 PM ET
That's wonderful!
Ann K. (liblit) - 2/8/2007 8:54 PM ET
clever
V M. (Giggles) - 2/11/2007 10:49 PM ET
Wow. That was deep. I like it.
Tamela R. - 2/22/2007 12:46 PM ET
Yeah, the last nine are always the most incomprehensible anyway...better to do away with them all together. Brilliant!!
Tamela R. - 2/22/2007 12:46 PM ET
Yeah, the last nine are always the most incomprehensible anyway...better to do away with them all together. Brilliant!!
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