The Eclectic Pen - Haiku /Palindrome


By: Paul H. (nessus19) - ,   + 43 more  
Date Submitted: 2/9/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 13
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  Anne has come back twice
To break my heart and her words
A raw war...redivider



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Susan J. - 2/10/2007 7:07 PM ET
Lovely!
V M. (Giggles) - 2/11/2007 10:51 PM ET
Man, who is this lady who's giving you problems? =) You might as well thank her because it's getting your juices flowing!! That was great!
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 2/13/2007 8:52 PM ET
i get the haiku, but where's the palindrome?
Marta J. (booksnob) - 2/15/2007 4:57 PM ET
Wow--good one!
Elizabeth B. (meowysmiles) - - 2/16/2007 5:07 PM ET
~Nice write~
Paul H. (nessus19) - , - 2/19/2007 12:19 PM ET
The writer responses... In response to a couple of comments: 1) Yes, the lady broke me heart. It is a deliciously painful experience -- as anyone who has suffered similarly will tell you. 2) The words "Anna" and "redivider" are palindromic. 3) The phrase "raw war" is palindromic. Be well, keep writing, and avoid too little garlic, Paul in Nebraska
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