The Eclectic Pen - haiku -- untitled


By: Paul H. (nessus19) - ,   + 43 more  
Date Submitted: 3/20/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 10
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  what destiny is
shaped when hands are removed by
decisions not made


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Judy M. (foreveramom) - 3/20/2007 8:38 PM ET
oh my, we do have some control. Thank you, J
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 3/20/2007 9:36 PM ET
great made me think
Kathleen N. (Katylovesbooks) - 3/20/2007 9:37 PM ET
very good. When you dont try to shape life, life happens.
Marta J. (booksnob) - 3/21/2007 8:57 AM ET
Thought-provoking. Nice!
Wendy lee L. (wendylee) - 5/10/2007 11:56 PM ET
sad, sweet bitter choice made when heart is not engaged decisions left cold......... thank you, paul
Wendy lee L. (wendylee) - 5/10/2007 11:57 PM ET
my comment was supposed to be a hiaku! ooops, it looks more like a "run-on"sentence now!! (O:
Eva L. (wearetrees) - 2/19/2009 2:51 PM ET
if we can wield choice/ and refuse to honor fate/ what, then, is free will?
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