The Eclectic Pen - Heaven Dweller


By: Sarah C. (aleya)   + 13 more  
Date Submitted: 4/16/2009
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Release your fingers
Heaven dweller
Drop the night on me

Sky shine lingers
Heaven dweller
But wish I not to see

It was early that I awoke
Only that the sooner might I sleep
But promise holds the dusk above me
My peace in its keep

So release your fingers
Heaven dweller
Drop your night on me


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Glenda B. (gidget63) - 4/17/2009 6:37 AM ET
I like the recurring "drop your night on me"; I interpret this as a prayer. Is that where you are going?
Sarah C. (aleya) - 5/3/2009 4:39 AM ET
somewhat- the narrator of the poem is depressed, but has faith thanks for your comment :)
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