The Eclectic Pen - The Hopeful Cat - A Haiku


By: Silvercat   + 22 more  
Date Submitted: 6/9/2007
Last Updated: 1/14/2016
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 12
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  Cat, why do you creep
Slowly down the garden path?
Breezes teasing you?


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Lesley F. (knitter) - 6/9/2007 6:54 PM ET
No breezes. I see a bird!
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 6/9/2007 7:11 PM ET
This looks like a haiku but has too many syllables. Just drop two and you have one. I like it though.
Jim H. (Pecos45) - 6/10/2007 5:01 AM ET
I'm a sucker for cat things. I can see the furry rascal. :)
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 6/11/2007 7:02 AM ET
Pretty....I like this one too.
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