The Eclectic Pen - Ian


By: KellyAnne O. (GreenGarnet) -   + 6 more  
Date Submitted: 9/17/2009
Genre: Health, Fitness & Dieting » Death & Grief
Words: 135
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  I cannot begin to describe
The love that i felt for him.

The many devoted years
that we spent together
Were the best of my life.

He helped me
during my sickness
And helped me
enjoy the good

I never imagined
my life without you.

When i shed a tear
out of anger
or out of pain

He was there
to help me smile again.

When he became ill
I denied it til the end

Even when he
was in so much pain
he couldnt even
Lift his head

He would still smile
that big beautifull smile
Just for me


He went so fast
I didnt even really
get to say good-bye

oh how i miss Ian
even now i still cry

I will miss you my love,
In heaven we will reunite.
and never be in pain again

your friendship
cannot be replaced

you are my world
our friendship and memories
forever will remain




--Kellyanne O Thank you for reading


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Caroline T. (carcarbball) - 9/24/2009 11:55 AM ET
very touching. i love it. -god bless.
Laura B. (Lbrownblack) - - 10/10/2009 1:53 PM ET
wow. sorry for your loss. I can feel it in my heart as I read your poem.
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