The Eclectic Pen - Incomplete


By: Kenjii H. (Daalmonette) - ,   + 36 more  
Date Submitted: 11/27/2009
Last Updated: 7/12/2011
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 43
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  loving hard is hardly love.
Taken by,
Shattered by,
Broken by love.
Wanting, needing, making,
love.
The prick,
The sting,
The art of love. Skin.
Forever.
Hide,
The shame,
Swallow the burn of the tears,
Of love.
Got to learn the fear of love.
Be defeated, before completed by,
love.
No...
Just know you are a creation of LOVE.
Perfect imperfection.


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Diane S. (DJStevens) - 11/28/2009 9:54 PM ET
Loved it! :)
Kenjii H. (Daalmonette) - , - 11/28/2009 10:13 PM ET
Thanks so much =D
Marta J. (booksnob) - 11/28/2009 11:02 PM ET
Very nice. This would be great read out-loud at a slam.
Kenjii H. (Daalmonette) - , - 11/29/2009 10:31 AM ET
This is my first [real] attempt at poetry. I like it! Thank you for your comments and ideas.
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