The Eclectic Pen - A Journey


By: Kelly W.   + 2 more  
Date Submitted: 2/25/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 93
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  I began the journey in solitude and quiet
My way was lonely, yet peaceful, with ease
None to rush along or dawdle
Only for me, as I choose

I noticed others bid me come
Heart lept for the fellowship sweet
New souls, wonders, delights
I entered the blessed chaos

Souls meld together, break, reattach
Too tender, too close
I weary from feeling
Give balm for my ache

Fellowship toils with sweat
Many the furrowed brow
Others a lasting scar
Who will continue to walk along?

Days fade into nights and back
Faces change with tidal temperament
Each I find if but only a smile
Part of the journey, though few finish.


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Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 2/26/2007 11:00 AM ET
nice effort. expresses the transitory nature of friendships and relationships. a little bittersweet.
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 2/26/2007 5:25 PM ET
good thought
Lynn B. (seraphina) - 3/26/2007 8:55 PM ET
I like it.
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