The Eclectic Pen - You lied!


By: Star U. (macgyvershe)   + 5 more  
Date Submitted: 6/13/2011
Genre: Humor & Entertainment » Humor
Words: 55
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  "The sun oozed over the horizon, shoved aside darkness, crept along the greensward and with sickly fingers pushed through the castle window: revealing the pillaged princess. Hand at throat, crown asunder, gaping in frenzied horror at the sated, sodden amphibian lying beside her; disbelieving the magnitude of the frog's deception, screaming madly.

"You lied!"







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Marta J. (booksnob) - 6/13/2011 6:01 PM ET
Funny!!
John S. - 6/15/2011 5:07 PM ET
That's funny. Good work.
Christy S. - 6/16/2011 8:31 PM ET
Dang funny............... glad it was *me.*
Christy S. - 6/16/2011 8:32 PM ET
Opps...... make that glad it WASN'T *me.* (Whew !!)
Silvercat - 6/20/2011 4:31 AM ET
Wonderfully creative!
hingram77 - 7/31/2011 10:24 PM ET
ahahahahahhaahha! This is beautiful! I love it! What creativity and image. You should make this into a poem instead. Not changing the wording at all, just breaking it up into stanzas. Really, this is very good! ~stands up and cheers~
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