The Eclectic Pen - Life of a girl who was abused


By: Amanda R. (amandaripsam)   + 10 more  
Date Submitted: 6/15/2007
Genre: Biographies & Memoirs
Words: 318
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  prologue

There once was a beautiful girl. The beautiful girl's name was Elizabeth sharp.
Elizabeth was the type of girl everyone wanted as a friend. sweet fun, outgoing and full of energy. The beautiful girl had blondish red hair and blue eyes. The beautiful girl had hair that touched just past her shoulders. Everyone wanted to know her secret to her great hair. Beauitufl girl knew a true lady never revels her secrets. Beautiful girl had a lot of other secrets no one but her close friend knew about.

Elizabeth had a lot going for her, for a 21 year old.
There was her handsome boyfriend Gary. Elizabeth also had lot's of friends.

A job working at a hair salon that catered to celbs and the local snobs.
who didn't mind forking out 250 dollars for a hair cut.
Elizabeths job was to make sure everyone in the salon was happy even if it ment being treated like trash. They were training her and preping her to be a celb hair stylist untill one day Elizabeth had enough.
She couldn't handle the pre mondonna attitude the mella dramma.

Elizabeth ened up quitting.
Elizabeth not only quit her job she walked out on everything and every one.
The handsom boyfriend was fooling around with some hussy.
Friends of Elizabeth were always interested in Elizabeth.
Not truly intrested in her but the gossip or just a glimps at some one who had a worst life the they did. Talking to Elizabeth they would fell better after. The friends weren't her true friends, they treated her like shit too. Friends of Elizabeth always tried to control her.
shooting down her dreams they would tell her that her plands would fail.

Elizabeth had a nervous break down. Elizabeth started drinking and even started sleeping around with strange men. That was untill John arrived on the scene.










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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 6/18/2007 7:10 PM ET
alot of pain here. well expressed
Amanda R. (amandaripsam) - 6/19/2007 1:57 AM ET
I am going to continue writing more just wanted to get prologue out on umm paper but didn't want to kill trees so I'm going to type my story here I'm glad someone enjoyed it
Sol E. (sunnychick104) - 6/28/2007 4:10 AM ET
i read your first attempt, i like how you're improving. continue!
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