The Eclectic Pen - Little White Lie


By: Tina S.  
Date Submitted: 3/20/2007
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Words: 10
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  Thou shall wilt
But not die
Upon a quilt
Made from a lie


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Marta J. (booksnob) - 3/20/2007 5:57 PM ET
Very dark... Well done!
Judy M. (foreveramom) - 3/20/2007 8:42 PM ET
oooh! dark, but sadly reality for some. Thank you! J
Kathleen N. (Katylovesbooks) - 3/20/2007 9:38 PM ET
very nice and can be very deep the more you think about it Katy
IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 3/20/2007 9:39 PM ET
I like it. Made me think.
Tom A. (TomsBooks333) - 3/23/2007 9:20 AM ET
oooh, yuck! But I really like it!
Carmela M. - 3/24/2007 9:40 AM ET
how true, lies slowly zap the joy of life, and somehow the end does not come to put you out of your misery. We should all think before we lie. This should be spread about--just like the saying of 'oh what a web we weave, when at first we deceive...' Nicely done!
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