The Eclectic Pen - I Look At You!


By: Kadi D. (kadisuzi)  
Date Submitted: 2/20/2008
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Words: 63
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  My darling lover
I look at you now
As you lay sleeping in angelic dreams
I look at you now
I think what would my world be without you
I look at you now
I wish this moment could last for eternity
I look at you now
I realize I have never really looked at you
I look at you now
I think I love you
I look at you now
Now you are awake!




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Crystal S. (LiveLife) - 2/20/2008 10:04 PM ET
I really like how you wrote this one. It shows that you care very much. I like writing poems like this. I always seem to write them when Im sad.
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