The Eclectic Pen - Love Addict


By: Claudia R. (BrokenWing)   + 21 more  
Date Submitted: 1/20/2008
Last Updated: 1/21/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 51
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  Donít you see
Your love is like a drug to me

Its all too clear
Iím intoxicated when youíre near

So please donít be rash
If you leave me I'll crash

My body sweats, my hands shake
Much more of this I can't take

By the docs Iíll be ignored
'Cause for love addicts thereís no ward.


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Jessica S. (jessnoelle07) - 2/1/2008 1:16 AM ET
I liked how you rhymed.
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 2/21/2008 8:01 AM ET
Thanks. One of my first tries at rhyming; harder than I thought.
Selena E. (Rayne) - , - 10/31/2009 3:53 PM ET
nice job.
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