The Eclectic Pen - Love, Hope. and Trust


By: Angela N. (wvgirl)   + 4 more  
Date Submitted: 7/14/2008
Last Updated: 7/15/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 36
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  Love as the earth
Surrounding the seed
Supporting,
Nourishing,
Feeding,
Expecting nothing in return.

Hope as the tree
Standing in the forest
Growing,
Stretching,
Dreaming,
For a Heaven it will never reach.


Trust as the leaf
Releasing from its home
Drifting,
Floating,
Falling,
but feeling no fear of the landing.


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Joyce M. (j3m) - 7/14/2008 2:41 PM ET
I really like this!!
Eva L. (wearetrees) - 7/14/2008 3:54 PM ET
lovely and wise
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 7/17/2008 10:15 AM ET
Lovely. I liked your personification of nature: the earth, the tree, the leaf and how you related these to love, hope and trust. Well-written.
Marta J. (booksnob) - 7/17/2008 5:50 PM ET
I enjoyed this; you packed a lot into the spare poetry.
Angela N. (wvgirl) - 7/17/2008 7:30 PM ET
Thanks I appreciate the comments. All of these are relatively old that I wrote for no one but me. It's little scary, not because of the fear of failure, but because I am showing my soul so to speak.
Karen L. - 7/28/2008 9:53 AM ET
Lovely! Karen Lee
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 7/31/2008 2:43 AM ET
This is beautiful, I really liked this one
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