The Eclectic Pen - Love so Sweet


By: Kathleen N. (Katylovesbooks)  
Date Submitted: 4/24/2007
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Love as sweet as I could touch
with his hands so workend rough.
The feeling of living on air
to much for even I to bare.

My heart is pained,
under the constant weather, rained.
Forever lodged this thorn
to be heard when lovers mourn.

So all who loved, this is you fable.
Don't try to change what your not able.
You'll be crushed by the inability
of stopping this relentless cruelty.


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IONE L. (zaneygraylady) - 4/25/2007 5:43 PM ET
very good
Kristen D. - 4/26/2007 11:29 AM ET
Sounds me and my quest of TRYING to be and fall and STAY in love...
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