The Eclectic Pen - Love's Lost Soul


By: Julie W. (poetsdream7) - ,  
Date Submitted: 7/30/2009
Last Updated: 8/2/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 46
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You see me as love's lost soul;
Scarred heart jarred tight
In bitter juices;
Nerves jagged and splayed
On skin's surface suffer
The lightest touch.

But bitterness is mine!
My cleansing tonic
Dissolves
The noxious sweet
Of sentiment.

And this skin is mine, whole-
Within this armor
I'm free,
Not lost,
To see the limits
Of your embrace.



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Beth K. (book-nook) - 8/8/2009 3:44 PM ET
I like it a lot.
Gussie R. (gussie) - 8/10/2009 7:23 PM ET
gosh both of your poems are amazing if you ever publish a book tell me :)
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