The Eclectic Pen - Low Down


By: Mark D. (Jarhead)  
Date Submitted: 3/11/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 12
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  Keep your head low son
But Dad, I'm invincible
Keep it like REAL LOW


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Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 3/11/2008 10:15 AM ET
sounds like good advice to a soldier.
Marta J. (booksnob) - 3/11/2008 10:59 PM ET
Like it!
Silvercat - 3/16/2008 12:51 AM ET
You really got a lot out of those 12 words. Nice going, Mark.
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