4 member(s) found this review helpful.
A decent, easy, sexy read.
But I think the author would have done better with either more or less. The story covered quite a number of incidents without delving into any of them too deeply. I would have appreciated more depth on all the things mentioned which would necessitate greater length, but less (as in more depth, but a shorter story line) would have also worked.
1 member(s) found this review helpful.
I like the story's premise, but it could have been a lot better. It was like it was two different books that didn't go together- cute and dirty. I enjoy good erotica, which it tried to be, but the language just didn't fit the sweet story. I couldn't see the characters saying some of the things they did. I also never really felt the love connection either. She was a virgin at 32, come on! She was a modern day professional not a sheltered lady. It was a quick read though, at least it had that going for it.
1 member(s) found this review helpful.
this book was rather stilted, main characters to wishy washy in their feelings. blah blah blah!