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Here it Goes... My first time doing this....Suggestions, constructive critisism welcome!
Clues: Ellora's Cave.. Very steamy, explicit... Starts out with a dream .....
Need slammed into ______'s pussy, burning along her nerve endings and stabbing her womb, a sizzle of heated desire singeing her oversitized nipples. Two pairs of hands and two mouths touched her everywhere as she breathed out a sigh of bliss. One's calloused palms caressed her distended nipples, pinching until she cried out. The taut buds tightend and sent ecstasy shooting straight between her legs. She ached all over, craved the touch of these two men like she'd never craved anything before. She needed them. Without them, she wasn't complete.
One lay underneath her, his thick cock nestled against her throbbing pussy. The other cupped her breasts in his huge hands, the crisp hairs of his chest tickling her back. he adjusted himself behind her, moving one hand away from her breasts to work the silky lubrication into her a--. stretching her until she burned with need, overcome with hunger impossible to resist.....
Clue: This is a Paranormal Romance - vampires, werewolves, etc..
In this scene the Heroine is in a dance club, watching others dance:
A___ rocked against her, pressing his cock against her ass. Heat seared her pussy. It wept its need for him, for his shaft. She bit down on her lip, to keep from begging him to f.... her.
"You can't hide from me," he whispered, his breath sailing across her cheek. "I can smell you. You're hot, aroused and desperate to come. I'll bet if you were alone you'd run to the ladies room and f.... yourself, wouldn't you, baby?"
"A vampire's senses are acute, H_____. When you learn to bring out your own, you'll know. We see more, feel more, can sense emotions and smell blood, fear, excitement and lust on another. Right now I can tell you how many times your heart beats in a minute. It's faster than normal because you're turned on watching A.. ride D's thigh. The tangy scent of your blood calls to me as one vampire calls to another. It's inexplicable, yet as elemental to us as breathing is to humans."
He slid one hand down her arm and over her hip, letting it rest there, kneading her flesh as he pumped his denim-clad shaft against her backside. Her legs trembled and she fought to still her rasping breaths.
Alright, here's one that's not an ebook, so perhaps more people have read it; I'm going to delete some of the text that makes this passage too long:
"Can they see us?" V (heroine) asked softly.
"No." G's (hero) voice was curiously taught. "They see a mirror." While V and G saw a window. And inside that window, the man and the women neither G nor V dared to be.
"How is it that w see them but they see a mirror?"
"The mirror is only half silvered." G's gaze di dnot waiver form the man and the woman.
"Can they hear us?" she asked softely.
"Not if we speak quietly."
"Do they know that the mirror isn't a ... mirror?" V asked.
She sounded breathless.
She was breathless.
"The man knows," G said.
The man was a prostitute, he did not need to say.
"Do you get a... aroused when you watch them?" V asked hurriedly.
"It's business," G said flatly.
The man unscrewed the squat white jar, sast both the lid and the jar down on the mahogany nightstand.
V fought to control her breathing. "What is in the jar?"
I'll give you two clues: it's historical and part of a series (and one of my all-time favorite love scenes).
"Do you want me to tell you?" He murmured. He felt her jerk slightly in surprise, and he chuckled. "Not about them, (heroine's name). You. Only you."
She turned, causing his lips to slide along her cheek. He drew back so he could see her face and her question was clear in her eyes.
What do you mean?
He moved his hands, exerting just enough pressure on her thighs to spread them open one more wicked inch. "Do you want me to tell you what I'm going to do now?" He leaned down, running his tongue along her nipple, which has grown hard and taut in the cool air of the late afternoon. "To you?" he added.
She swallowed convulsively. He decided to take that as a yes.
"There are so many choices," he added huskily, sliding his hands up her legs another few inches. "I scarcely know where to start."
He stopped to look at her for a moment. She was breathing hard, her lips parted and plump from his kisses. And she was mesmerized, completely under his spell.
He dipped closer once again, to her other ear, so he could make sure his words fell hot and moist upon her soul. "I think, however, that I would have to start wher you need me most. First I'd kiss you . . ." -- he pressed his thumbs into the soft flesh of her inner thights -- "here."
He held silent, just for a second, just long enough for her to shiper with desire. "Would you like that?" he murmured, his question intended to torment and tease. "Yes, I can see that you would.
"But that wouldn't be enough", he mused, "for either of us. So clearly, I would then have to kiss you here." His thumbs inched up until they reached the hot crevice between her legs and her torso, and then he pressed gently, so she would know exactly what he was talking about. "I think you would enjoy a kiss right there," he added, "almost as much" -- he slid along the crease, down, down, closer to the very center of her, but not quite all the way-- "as I would like to kiss you."
Her breath came a little faster
"I'd have to take my time there," he murmured, "switch, perhaps, from my lips to my tongue. Run it along the edge right here." He used one fingernail to show her what he meant. "And all the while, I would be pushing you farther and farther open. Like that, maybe?"
Any guesses. It's popular, so hopefully not too hard.
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