Helpful Score: 1
The storyline is so preposterous as to be unbelievable. And the H/h fall in love at first sight, & he proposes marriage after one night of passion? - uh, I don't think so. But, after all, this is fiction, isn't it? And don't forget the bad guys, who all get their just deserts. Oooh, even the good guys can be bad............
Sorry, this was just too far fetched for me. Too many holes in the story, no character development or motivation. It needed to be "fleshed out". It was a fast, easy read, probably good for the beach, then forget about it.
Sorry, this was just too far fetched for me. Too many holes in the story, no character development or motivation. It needed to be "fleshed out". It was a fast, easy read, probably good for the beach, then forget about it.
Helpful Score: 1
I really liked this story, but it really needed alittle bit more development between the two main characters.
