The Eclectic Pen - Questions


By: Justina C. (stinasstoryspot)   + 13 more  
Date Submitted: 10/27/2008
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 59
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  What does it mean?
A touch,
A look,
A kiss (the chocolate kind),
A word,
A smile,
A laugh.
What do you mean by all this?
Why do you tease me this way?
Iím here
Waiting
For you to make a move.
Stop confusing me.
Is this a game to you?
Is it like Cranium
Or Taboo,
Or Mafia,
Or Twister?
A game where you manipulate
Your body,
Your mind,
My mind?
Stop playing with me.
Make a move
Or move on.


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Marta J. (booksnob) - 10/29/2008 9:02 AM ET
You have SO captured that moment in time when flirtation stops being fun and becomes a head game. This poem is whimsical but powerful.
Lena S. (SquirrelNutkin) - 10/30/2008 7:12 AM ET
I loved this
Sabriena W. (hazeleyesrangeleyes) - 10/30/2008 8:17 PM ET
Good job.
Sophira B. (sophiraness) - 11/5/2008 4:45 PM ET
everyone knows that for a man (most of the time)....its all in the chase. in a way, it is all a game. thats what this makes me think.
Veronica S. (snowkitty) - - 11/8/2008 12:39 PM ET
The last three words said it...last chance or move on. Really good.
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