The Eclectic Pen - Questions


By: Tammy B. (TammyB)   + 3 more  
Date Submitted: 1/5/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 192
Rating:


  Never in a hundred years
Could I have imagined you
My dream come true
So beautiful heart and soul

Never in a hundred years
Could I have imagined you
Saying those words I was so desperate to hear

I love you…

Never in a hundred years
Could I have imagined
I could feel this way
Just the sight of you
Could take my breath away

Over and over I wanted to scream…

Never in a hundred years
Could I imagined
I could hurt this much

You ran away from me
Ripping my heart from my chest
My soul was left tattered and torn

Never in a hundred years
Could I have imagined
This pain inside me

No where to turn
No where to flee
It burns inside of me
A dull throbbing ache

Tears won’t come
Drops won’t fall

Everywhere I look
You’re all I see

Your amazing eyes
Your bright smile
The chiseled jaw
I yearned to touch

Now there is another gazing upon you
Receiving your smiles
Basking in your warm embrace

Never in a hundred years
Could I have imagined
These questions that haunt me

Why did you leave me?
Did I not love you enough?
Did my arms not hold you tight enough?

Why didn’t you let me love you?

Never in a hundred years
Could I have imagined you…

My dream come true…

The pain will not go away

I still love you…



The Eclectic Pen » All Stories by Tammy B. (TammyB)

Member Comments


Leave a comment about this story...




Comments 1 to 6 of 6
Jim H. (Pecos45) - 1/5/2007 5:34 AM ET
Feels aren't forever. The good won't last but neither will the bad.
Marta J. (booksnob) - 1/5/2007 3:27 PM ET
"And I'm here to remind you of the mess you made when you went away". Get mad!
Maria P. (BklynMom) - , - 1/6/2007 5:08 PM ET
It's hard not to respond to the emotion of what you have written. You express yourself clearly and accurately- pain does draw attention to itself. And now, just remember: It's your life, your choices- and there are many fish in the sea!
Tammy B. (TammyB) - 1/10/2007 4:35 AM ET
Thanks you all, for your comments.
Kathleen S. (newship24) - 10/16/2007 11:48 PM ET
This seemed to be written from the heart, the real thing. True love does not just pass. It affects your soul. I think God meant it to. We are meant to love and trust wholly. It is a marvel when the love and trust lasts a lifetime, stunning when it does not.
Tammy B. (TammyB) - 10/29/2007 1:33 AM ET
It was written from the heart. Thank you, Kathleen.
Comments 1 to 6 of 6