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Subject: read and comment patriciak.
Date Posted: 7/1/2009 11:16 PM ET
Member Since: 5/13/2009
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my first time trying out electric pen, please read and let me know what you think...never published but do write short stories; i've read a lot of discussions and got great tips wish i could download everything everyone said.

Date Posted: 7/7/2009 11:55 AM ET
Member Since: 10/12/2008
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You can print it ;0) Also if you add a link to your story in electric pen we can take look directly. PS. be aware of first rights, anything you put on web, counts as publication as was noted in one of the forums, and can't be offered for first rights. In other words, you may not get it published in a serious magazine as they will only except first rights. Lenka
Subject: linking to electric pen
Date Posted: 7/20/2009 6:28 PM ET
Member Since: 5/13/2009
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how do it link my story in electric pen so i can get evaluated....it s just something off top of my head.patricia k.

Date Posted: 7/20/2009 10:03 PM ET
Member Since: 4/19/2007
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http://www.paperbackswap.com/the_eclectic_pen/all_member_stories.php?m=c0ZQaWV1VGJDQWc9

Patricia,

I think this link might work.  You might want to look and confirm that this is your story (I am just not 100 percent sure . . .)

 

I had never gone and looked in the Eclectic Pen Section, so I am not sure how it works, but I just scrolled through until I found a story by "patricia". 

 

It is a very vivid story with a great hook in the first paragraph.