The Eclectic Pen - Secret


By: Kenjii H. (Daalmonette) - ,   + 36 more  
Date Submitted: 11/28/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 29
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  Close the door,
Draw the shade.
Flick the switch,
Darkness hides.
The secret that no one knows,
In the drawer underneath my clothes.
Shiny, hard, pink and quick,
I just love to rub my little...
Eraser.


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Marta J. (booksnob) - 11/28/2009 11:00 PM ET
LOL!!
Jesse (EddyKrueger) - 11/29/2009 1:49 AM ET
Yes, I love this poem. It's strike me as mischievous. This is your second poem Kenjii, I think you're a natural at it.
Kenjii H. (Daalmonette) - , - 11/29/2009 10:35 AM ET
I am never going to be the same [serious/deep] in every poem it seems. Like my writing, it varies. I knew as I was writing this, it was going to be a funny one =D.
Claudia R. (BrokenWing) - 12/19/2009 4:12 PM ET
Cute ;-D What a little tease you are. Nice misdirection.
Michal W. (Princess101) - 2/5/2010 3:54 PM ET
WHAT?!?! that is soooooooo funny! you had me wondering till the last line..... michal
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