The Eclectic Pen - The Setting Sun


By: Christina S. (hotrods340)  
Date Submitted: 7/29/2009
Last Updated: 7/29/2009
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 62
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  The sun starts it's daily descend,
quickly falling, Minute by minute

As the sun slips further and further,
a golden rainbow lights the horizon,


As the sun falls beneath the clouds,
The warmth of the day gone with it,

The moon begins to awaken and rise,
with it comes the night clouds,

The clouds wet and Heavy,
with the days evaporations,

Threatening to release its wetness,
To sprinkle down upon man below.


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Jesse (EddyKrueger) - 7/30/2009 1:56 AM ET
"As the sun falls beneath the clouds, The warmth of the day gone with it, The moon begins to awaken and rise, with it comes the night clouds," -that is my favoraite part, so beautiful.
Robin W. - 8/4/2009 11:39 PM ET
AMAZING!!!
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