The Eclectic Pen - Short Song Collection


By: Danielle P.   + 4 more  
Date Submitted: 9/22/2010
Genre: Humor & Entertainment » Music
Words: 194
Rating:


 
1) Untitled
Rhymes remind me of the times
When we were care free
run around and play
act foolish back in the day
But now it's all seriousness
Depression, Deaths and Suicides
Just want to let it go for now
Everyone is so full of lies
crimes committed each day
young kids on drugs
it's not right to end it that way
*I have always imagined this song to be sang like a song by Linkin Park*

2) The Real You or Your Secret
Everyone judges
not caring about the real you
not caring 'bout your feelings
I can feel it too (I can feel it too)
they make jokes and insults
cutting a hole deep inside
trying to hide
this you they see is just a lie
pretending you don't care
afraid of the hated stares
you can feel the heat of their glares
Family can't help you
even if they say they love you too
if you let our your secret
the REAL you
they will start to shout
it hurts deep inside
a hole were your heart and soul used to be
you need freedom, a place where you could be free
they judge you not caring
I can feel it too (I can feel it too)
your insides are tearing
everyone judges, not caring
This you they see is just a lie
pretending that you don't care




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Teresa E. (rokstarr) - 9/22/2010 11:09 PM ET
nice my daughter writes songs too.
Jessica L. (classychic30) - 10/5/2010 10:01 PM ET
Very good stuff...it grab at the heart...I can see the linkin park sound in this
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