The Eclectic Pen - For My Son


By: Laurie B. (Laurie816)  
Date Submitted: 1/15/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 43
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  I sit and rock
This tiny Thing
If I had only known
The joy you'd bring

Little Fingers
Little Toes
Little smiles
Little nose

Crawling, walking
You're growing fast
cooing, talking
How time has past

Starting school
It's so near
I love you so
My little Dear

I'll let you go
My big boy
And wait patiently
For more joy


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Laurie B. (Laurie816) - 1/15/2007 3:28 PM ET
testing
Jim H. (Pecos45) - 1/15/2007 5:35 PM ET
Good test, Laurie. I know the feelings here. All good. :)
BARBARA D. (TINKER) - 1/15/2007 8:47 PM ET
YOU CAPTURED ALL THE LOVE A MOTHER FEELS FOR HER CHILD,EVEN HOW A GRANDMOTHER FEELS TOO.
Dena (Suzie) C. (DsuzieC) - 1/16/2007 5:19 PM ET
Beautiful!
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