The Eclectic Pen - Summer Bummer (Haiku)


By: Silvercat   + 22 more  
Date Submitted: 6/22/2007
Genre: Literature & Fiction » Poetry
Words: 12
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  The hot sun in eyes
Long dimmed, made tears flow freely.
I need sunglasses!


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Marta J. (booksnob) - 6/22/2007 8:46 AM ET
So cute! Love it.
Jessica H. (jesshall) - 6/24/2007 1:48 PM ET
I love this! It's short and sweet and super funny. I know exactly how you feel!
Sabiel C. (sabu423) - 7/8/2007 12:50 PM ET
This is excellent!! I love all your haikus...
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